曾看到网友写了以下四个句子,请问都正不正确?
1. She is riding a unicycle, singing.
2. Singing, she is riding a unicycle.
3. Looking above, he saw a plane flying by.
4. He saw a plane flying by, looking above.
1. She isriding a unicycle, singing. (正。随着状语。riding 和 singing,动作主次分明)
2. Singing,she is riding a unicycle.(?勉强可以。在这个地方,singing 只能表示时间,作时间状语,等于 While she is singing。这个句子最好使过去时态,描述过去的状况。)
3. Looking up, he saw a plane flying by.(正。时间状语)
4. He saw aplane flying by, looking up. (误。由于 “朝上看” 与 “看见飞机” 可以表示 “时间,条件,缘由” 等关系,但没有随着关系,looking up 放在随着的地方,不正确)
个人领会:目前分词作状语,与谓语动词之间存在多种关系。作随着状语时,应放在谓语动词之后,由于随着是一个辅助和次要的动作。随着一直在后,一般没有随着在先的状况。